05082017 Some advertisements for game apps

Some banner ads for game applications are wrong. I mean that they cannot serve the purpose. I think people play game apps mainly in order to kill time. If so, the advertisements for them have to characterize them as appropriate for those who want to do it. But recently, I saw many ads which advertise them as addictive. If you get addicted to a game app, it makes you waste your time rather than kill your time. Nobody wants to download such an app. Advertisements that are counter-effective in this sense is nothing more than a waste of money which leads to that of time.

英語の効果的なライティング方法に沿ってひとつパラグラフを書いてみたが(ちゃんとできているかはわからないが)全然面白くない。でもいわゆるアカデミックライティングってこんな感じなのでしょう。